Welcome back.
Joanna returns to the waking world groggy and disoriented.
I swear there’s always something. Either I’ll be working on a page and PhotoShop will poop out on me or I’ll get everything done and my web connections decide it’s their day off. The computer gods are against me. Forget the computer gods, I shall continue work on my comic until I have nothing left to work on. *shakes fist*
You know I just realized I should probably be talking about the comic rather then threating imaginary deities.
The major gripe I have are with their legs, Joanna’s mostly. Perspective once again rears it’s ugly head and bites me on the butt. Jo’s one leg look like I chopped off her lower leg and just nailed her foot back on. (Speaking of her feet, I’m not even sure if that is her foot.) The other one looks way too long and bent weird. Max seems to have the same problem but it’s not as glaring as Jo’s.
Another minor problem I have is I tried to make it look like moss was growing on the wall in some places using only color. I think next time I’d be better off just drawing the moss in first.
Other then those two things I’m actually pretty happy with this page. Jo and Max turned out pretty good for the most part and I especially like the three-panel sequence at the bottom. Thou I think the last seen might be a little too fast and violent then I intended.
November 23rd, 2009 at 9:30 am
grate page as always. i do have a question though. why do you have your vote button on the link page only? wouldn’t it be more affective if it was on the main page or on the pages of the comic it self? i have to deal with some of those imaginary deities too, just keep fighting the good fight
November 23rd, 2009 at 11:46 am
mostly cause I haven’t figured out how to edit the main page. If I could i have a bunch of stuff I’d like to put on it. At least thanks to you I now know people are actully looking at the links page.
Never acrured to me to put it on the comic page itself. I’ll have to try that.